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.:MLW:. Brokensoul

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---General---

Name: Brokensoul
Past or future names: Whitekit|Whitepaw|Brokenpaw|Brokensoul
----Prefix: Broken-- for the way he responded to the scars he had, changed to broken for lack of self likeness.
----suffix: soul-- for his ambitous, and angry traits. Also for the term used to describe him "A damaged soul"

(OMFG Okay so I will finish this tomorrow. Please know this is a work in progress App. I have to go to bed other wise I'll be grounded. G'night. Please also do not accept this or ask about until I finish it tomorrow. Sorry))
EDIT:. I will finish NOW :3


Clan: Dustclan
Gender: Male
Age: 32 Moons
Rank: Warrior
Breed: Somali
Mentor/apprentice: None
orientation: straight

Bought anything?:
n/a


---Skills---


Out of 10:
Swimming: 3/10
Climbing: 8/10
Hunting: 8/10
Fighting: 9/10
Defence: 7/10
Stealth: 6/10
Herb knowlege: 9/10
belief in starclan: 10/10

---Appearance---


Fur-- 
Smooth (34%)
Fur length (59%)
Bristle (21%)
Dryness (12%)

Colour and patterns: Brown pelt with Black stripes
Scars and/or disability : A few scars all around his body
Build: muscular
Scent: Dried blood mixed with a minty scent

--Traits/personality--

(THIS MUST INCLUDE A GOOD, NEUTRAL AND BAD TRAIT(s)
of each for example...)

Good:
Bullet; Green Good Hunter
Bullet; Green Good with medicine, even if he is a warrior (omg what a weird cat no jk XD)
Bullet; Green Has a great sense of others (ex: Knows how they feel, or can understand what they are doing.)

Neutral:
Bullet; Yellow Is neutral with Loyalty
Bullet; Yellow Defending others
Bullet; Yellow truthful

bad:
Bullet; Red impatient  
Bullet; Red angered
Bullet; Red is bad at Liking others 

Likes: Herbs, Quiet places, and kits

Dislikes: Twolegs, death, and Noisy places

---Relationships---




Bullet; White Wary of
Bullet; WhiteBullet; White Fear
Bullet; WhiteBullet; WhiteBullet; White Terror

Bullet; Green Friend
Bullet; GreenBullet; Green Good Friend
Bullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; Green Best Friend
Bullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; Green Unbreakable Bond
Bullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; Green Love (platonic)

Bullet; Blue Pity
Bullet; BlueBullet; Blue Friendly Competition
Bullet; BlueBullet; BlueBullet; Blue Frenemy
Bullet; BlueBullet; BlueBullet; BlueBullet; Blue Rival

Bullet; PurpleUnmet family member
Bullet; PurpleBullet; PurpleMet family member
Bullet; PurpleBullet; PurpleBullet; Purple Well known family member

Bullet; Pink Former crush
Bullet; PinkBullet; Pink Slight interest in
Bullet; PinkBullet; PinkBullet; Pink Crush

Bullet; Yellow Respect
Bullet; YellowBullet; Yellow Acquaintance
Bullet; YellowBullet; YellowBullet; Yellow  Wants to be friends with
Bullet; YellowBullet; YellowBullet; YellowBullet; Yellow  Admires/Role-model

Bullet; Red Lust
Bullet; RedBullet; Red Love Interest
Bullet; RedBullet; RedBullet; Red Love (romantic)

Bullet; Orange Jealous
Bullet; OrangeBullet; Orange Discomfort
Bullet; OrangeBullet; OrangeBullet; Orange Angered by

Bullet; Black Dislike
Bullet; BlackBullet; Black Brewing hate
Bullet; BlackBullet; BlackBullet; Black Hate
Flame Wants dead

Star!Sister/brother
Star!Star!Mother/father
Heart Mate
★ Considers family
Death Dead

Leafclan 
(brief thought on the clan)
{Name} {gender} {Bullets} {comment}

Dustclan
(brief thought on the clan)
{Name} {gender} {Bullets} {comment}


Rainclan 
(brief thought on the clan)
{Name} {gender} {Bullets} {comment}


Stoneclan 
(brief thought on the clan)
{Name} {gender} {Bullets} {comment}


(DO NOT PUT UNKNOWN OR DEAD)
Mother: Littlewing (not using as a character)
Father: Blackfeet (not using as a character)
Siblings: none
(these are optional VVV )
Interested in: no one
Crush: none
Mate: none
Kits: none 
Turn ons: none XD
Turn offs: nope

History:


Kithood: As a kit, Littlekit disliked most everything. He watched his mother die under a tree, and his father leave. He had no interest in becoming an apprentice, and had no friends what so ever. He completely had nothign to do, but mope. He discovered that his father left because of him, and put himself into depression.


Apprenticehood: After he became an apprentice, he had been more active. He adventured a lot without permission, and almost lost everything he had to a cat from another clan. He liked the feeling of out being free, away from that dreadful camp. His mentor was the worst.
After he received a few scars, and people didn't trust him, he decided to change his name. He changed it to Brokenpaw, for the lack of friends and the lack of some fur. Brokenpaw decided to keep his name as a trophy. To show he fought for his clan.


Warrior: Brokenpaw has now become Brokensoul. He still had no friends, and no interest in mates. He tried to show loyalty to others, but always failed. He was anxious to leave, to leave behind the cats who seemed like nothing to him. Then he started visiting the medicine cat, after loosing a few traces of fur in a battle.  He learned of herbs of all, and knew how to heal. He was still interested in it, even if he could never be a true medicine cat. 
He still likes to run free, and to fulfill what his warrior skills are ment for. His loves to work with herbs. He seems to like healing more then hurting, but again couldn't be a medicine cat.


--- Rp details---


Roleplay availability
Notes | ✔
Skype | ✘
Chats | ✔
Comments | ✔


Roleplay ratings
G/PG | ✔
PG-13 | ✔
M | ✔

Roleplay example

Brokensoul dug his claws firmly into the ground. The day had been long and boring, with nothing to do. He crouched down, the sun shined down to the floor. Prey should be out He thought to himself. He knew some of the prey liked to bathe themselves in the heat. He let down a hiss when the mouse ran in alert. "Stupid mouse" He hissed silently. His fur layed flat on his shoulder, until he could hear a twoleg bounding across the ground in no care at all. It seemed to approach the monster, and got inside it. "So thats what monsters do. Their prey is twolegs." He hissed, laughing.

(If you want more I will give more. My fingers are about to Explode. Thank you.)


This is for the Moonlight warriors group. Thank you
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CandyZhu's avatar
Awesomely cool!